Introducing Revision -- Adding into the Middles of Texts -- Adding Dialogue -- Revising by Taking Away -- Planning Revision -- Revising Leads -- Describing Writing Work -- Showing, Not Telling -- More Showing, Not Telling -- Revising Endings -- Revising While Writing -- Partnering for Revision -- Refitting Writing to Different Genres -- Learning Revision from Authors -- Preparing to Celebrate -- Celebrating Revision: Setting Up a Museum.
Summary
Part of a year-long curriculum made up of primary-writing units